Monday, December 28, 2009

Paraphrase

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Some claim the number of Sumatran elephants remaining in the wild is around 1,500, while the more conservative believe 1,000 is more likely. A further 9000 or so are found in Sumatra’s elephant camps; once known as elephant training centers, the camps are now called elephant conservation centers and are designed to save the species.



Paraphrase:

The amounts of the rest Sumatran elephants which are about 1,500 in the wild are claimed by people, while some of them believe that it is just 1000. More than 9000 and even more are found in Sumatra’s elephant camps; which is called as elephant training centers and now have been popularized as elephant conservation centers and are build to save the species.

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